I am really chuffed that my poem Your Driver Cries and the poem that I wrote in the moment, from which is was derived, The Last High and Low of a Mouse, are featured in the poetry workshop in May’s edition of Writing Magazine.
Alison Chisholm does a great job in her analysis and accompanying article. I hope that you enjoy both poems and Alison’s two-page workshop.
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Congratulations!
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Congratulations Lance! I love both forms and versions. And the analysis by Alison is a joy to read. As a writer, I can understand the development of an idea and how emotions steadily become a part of the storyline. The way you bring out that initial spark of relief and then douse it with the agony of disappointment is simply marvelous. I can’t help but feel sad for the mouse while simultaneously acknowledging that ‘survival of the fittest’ is what makes the world go round. Your own emotional upheaval adds a genuineness to the entire piece. This is wonderful and creative writing! Thanks for sharing this with me. 🙂
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